"If you don't have anything good to say, don't say anything at all". Nah, just kidding. It wasn't bad. It wasn't good either though. It was okay. Felt a bit rushed, but it was also my first forum game so.. I'm not in a position to judge.
It wasn't good, but it also wasn't bad, it was just kinda fine. With that being said, if i could make once change, it'd be to change how the branching paths work. Personally, the players should only know the point ahead of them and each point should join back up again within a turn or two.