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<p>[QUOTE="Vendor-Lazarus, post: 4636, member: 4"]</p><p>Pretty good. </p><p>I read a lot of HFY (see footnote) Sci-Fi and Fantasy on reddit and this could be very well received there. They are no strangers to new writers and the spirit of camaraderie creates a good atmosphere for spell-checkers, constructive criticism and writing tips & techniques.</p><p></p><p>My own constructive critique would be that I find the start involves a little bit too much introspective and descriptive thoughts. Together with an overly verbose manner of text. The flowery language could perhaps be condensed and screened for just the basics needed to set up the world.</p><p>Other than that, the middle and end was very well done, with dropping just enough hints to whet the appetite, which is then followed through with just enough info to feel satisfied but leave room for more revelations.</p><p></p><p>Footnote <a href="https://old.reddit.com/r/HFY/">https://old.reddit.com/r/HFY/</a>; </p><p>( Observe the placement of the , and any following !, ?, ..., or the interrobang)</p><p>HFY are stories about humans being humans. Everything that makes us unique and special. From "Humanity, Fuck Yeah!" which involves epic victories against long odds or along such similar lines TO "Humanity Fuck, Yeah" which involves pancakes (don't ask, just..read.. ^^) and exotic aliens in saucy tales AND even HWTF (Humanity, what the fuck) about genocides, revenge and other things of a darker or more tragic nature.</p><p>[/QUOTE]</p>
[QUOTE="Vendor-Lazarus, post: 4636, member: 4"] Pretty good. I read a lot of HFY (see footnote) Sci-Fi and Fantasy on reddit and this could be very well received there. They are no strangers to new writers and the spirit of camaraderie creates a good atmosphere for spell-checkers, constructive criticism and writing tips & techniques. My own constructive critique would be that I find the start involves a little bit too much introspective and descriptive thoughts. Together with an overly verbose manner of text. The flowery language could perhaps be condensed and screened for just the basics needed to set up the world. Other than that, the middle and end was very well done, with dropping just enough hints to whet the appetite, which is then followed through with just enough info to feel satisfied but leave room for more revelations. Footnote [url=https://old.reddit.com/r/HFY/]https://old.reddit.com/r/HFY/[/url]; ( Observe the placement of the , and any following !, ?, ..., or the interrobang) HFY are stories about humans being humans. Everything that makes us unique and special. From "Humanity, Fuck Yeah!" which involves epic victories against long odds or along such similar lines TO "Humanity Fuck, Yeah" which involves pancakes (don't ask, just..read.. ^^) and exotic aliens in saucy tales AND even HWTF (Humanity, what the fuck) about genocides, revenge and other things of a darker or more tragic nature. [/QUOTE]
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