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<p>[QUOTE="Vendor-Lazarus, post: 11911, member: 4"]</p><p>Two misspelled words that I could find:</p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p>Otherwise, pretty interesting all in all. Maybe a bit too lighthearted, and skipping over some more intricate environment details, but it's just the right amount of ecchi, romance, comedy, mystery. Maybe flesh out the fight scenes to cause some suspense. I have to say that repeated time-travel is not my favorite trope. It easily turns bad or convoluted. You've managed to hang a lamp on it, but it still throws up questions that will go unanswered. Though many won't care about that negligable minute detail.. Right, one final thing. Does the MC have a name? I think I missed it.</p><p>[/QUOTE]</p>
[QUOTE="Vendor-Lazarus, post: 11911, member: 4"] Two misspelled words that I could find: Otherwise, pretty interesting all in all. Maybe a bit too lighthearted, and skipping over some more intricate environment details, but it's just the right amount of ecchi, romance, comedy, mystery. Maybe flesh out the fight scenes to cause some suspense. I have to say that repeated time-travel is not my favorite trope. It easily turns bad or convoluted. You've managed to hang a lamp on it, but it still throws up questions that will go unanswered. Though many won't care about that negligable minute detail.. Right, one final thing. Does the MC have a name? I think I missed it. [/QUOTE]
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